Alkaizer87: Wow they're playing rock, papeer, scissors of their world huh? Rock being that energy mgic stuff she shot, so naturally paper won, and scissors with ehr magic blade.
22:00, 07.14.10
Max: I like panel 5. Panel 6 does seem a little off to me. Just seems to be lacking some emotion. Still a thousand time better than what I could do.
Fae: I happen to love all the panels and am mad jealous of your awesome skill, Mike. :1
20:02, 07.14.10
Kar: @dredogastus f: why dont you try to draw the panel better
19:00, 07.14.10
MikeLL: @Slenkamure: Thats not really fair, I do care what people think, but I'm not going to redraw an entire panel, so telling me its "weak" does nothing but make me feel like crap for a moment.
18:17, 07.14.10
Slenkamure: Nitpicking a webcomics quality is like telling the government to shape up.....sure you can say it but you really think they care what you thing
18:16, 07.14.10
Slenkamure: wow aren't some of you people rude, last i checked you don't have to pay to read this comic so nitpicking about quality concerns? seriously? LAME
17:30, 07.14.10
Argyle: You've done it again! My interest in this series never ends! A gentleman fights with a handkerchief!
16:21, 07.14.10
Voidfest: @dredogastus f. Commentary in text on what a picture looks like is just counter productive.
15:54, 07.14.10
Pinksalmun: @dredogastus f: Just because you're a constant reader doesn't give you the right to be rude. Criticism should be constructive... start your own comic and then you can say what is or isn't "weak".
15:10, 07.14.10
dredogastus f: (Darn 25 word limit Sending spell.) P-5 also seems...unfocused? Lastly p-6, I see Fiona surprising Van with her new toy. Sean RM sees the fabric stopping Fi's attack.
15:04, 07.14.10
dredogastus f: Oh. Well in p-5 Van appears mildly puzzled. Would expect grin or measuring look on Fi's rush. P-6 similar crit @ Fiona's expression.
SeanRM: I'm pretty sure Fiona's face in the last panel is her slowly realizing that she just got stopped by a handkerchief. It's not a strong reaction, but a more subtle look that reality is sinking in.
Archwright: That's quite the ambivalent face you have there, Fiona.
07:59, 07.14.10
Spirit Studios 2010: Make a dove appear next van! Make a dove appear and fly away!
05:55, 07.14.10
midgetshrimp: I can see what dre is saying, especially the last panel. Looks as though her facial expression was rushed, or just meh'd. Rest of the panels look fine to me, though.
RSS Feed